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The Park The clouds in the sky create a nice cool blanket from the hot sun. I can smell the rain that was once falling. The sound from the cars and the people create a nice little harmony that one could easily lay down and relax to. Not too far off in the distance I see the old softball stadium. And scattered around the park are huge oak trees. I can also see the playground, …

…l it is to use writing strategies. I now see how helpful it is to first think about how I can describe something so that the reader knows exactly what I see and then use a strategy to actually describe it. This writing assignment also showed me that by using these strategies it makes it very easy to get both a positive and negative description out of one scene.